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Nothing More... by *redvelvetroses:iconredvelvetroses:



Crystal teardrops fall away.
Smashing, breaking, on the hard cold ground.
There is nothing more saddening,
Than watching a heartbreak.
Nothing more depressing,
Than being a witness.

Angry fists cry red agony,
Pounding into the walls of life.
There is nothing more aggravating,
Than precious nothing lost.
Nothing more annoying,
Than loosing what was never there.

Lonely heads bow and melt,
Ice-cold hands hide away a forbidden face.
There is nothing more dividing,
Than painful silence.
Nothing more harmful,
Than words never spoken.

Trembling hands try to fix,
And cover the cold, broken shards.
There is nothing more frightening,
Than something not meant.
Nothing more terrifying,
Than everlasting regret.

Warm arms are extended out,
Reaching over mountains of broken, then grasp and take hold.
There is nothing more enjoyable,
Than watching someone mend.
Nothing more pleasant,
Than being a witness.
©2007-2008 *redvelvetroses
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meh.

i wrote it in like 20 minutes.

i think its about the cycle of emotions people go though. when they are upset. then someone else come and helps them through... i have no idea. one of those things i write then read. lol.

yep. thats me. the writer that has no idea what shes on about. ^-^

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~Sheltari:iconSheltari: Jun 3, 2007, 9:20:55 PM
I hardly know what I write about sometimes, lol...

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"Though it made no sense to me,
You made me believe I could trust some one."
*redvelvetroses:iconredvelvetroses: Jun 3, 2007, 9:29:46 PM
lol. yeah. sometimes, i just some paper and a pen. and start to write, normally trying to get the pen to work. and i come out with some random crap... lol..

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More than words..
~Sheltari:iconSheltari: Jun 3, 2007, 9:35:26 PM
Hey, I like random, lol....

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Speak Without Lies

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*redvelvetroses:iconredvelvetroses: Jun 3, 2007, 9:39:02 PM
hah, i should put some of that stuff on here.

just little clipets of stories that are probably not even 10 lines long. lol.

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More than words..
*Kayarlynnean:iconKayarlynnean: Jun 3, 2007, 10:17:41 PM
you're like me then... most of the time my writing just happens and I don't even think about it. I come up with maybe the first or second line and then the rest just flows. But I think you beat me at writing. You seem much better at it. I look up to you as a writer.
*redvelvetroses:iconredvelvetroses: Jun 3, 2007, 11:31:58 PM
*blushes*

i don't think i could handle that.

i think most of my writing sucks >.<

lets call it even? ok?

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More than words..
*redvelvetroses:iconredvelvetroses: Jun 4, 2007, 12:17:00 AM
w00t!! yay!

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More than words..
~Sheltari:iconSheltari: Jun 4, 2007, 3:03:36 PM
I'd read them all the same^^

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Speak Without Lies

A club I'm part of: [link]
*redvelvetroses:iconredvelvetroses: Jun 4, 2007, 10:14:52 PM
woooooooo!!

my stuff will be read!!

and then everyone will run away screaming cause they think ive gone nutty.

gone?

wrrong word.

is nutty!!

woo!!

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More than words..